I like that you and Soyla showed so much detail in your work.I think you can improve on trying to put some examples of who died in the worled, but you don't have to say names.
I like how you and Soyla said the three main ways that people die, and how.One thing I suggest you do is adding more advice and tips for dealing with death.Alex
I like that you and Soyla showed so much detail in your work.
ReplyDeleteI think you can improve on trying to put some examples of who died in the worled, but you don't have to say names.
I like how you and Soyla said the three main ways that people die, and how.
ReplyDeleteOne thing I suggest you do is adding more advice and tips for dealing with death.
Alex